Thursday, September 24, 2009

In Search of the past days-6

Rahul was very happy today..it was like a new life...a new beginning..on his way he picked up some fresh orchids..Neha loved orchids and Rahul always use to take them along whenever he met Neha before marriage ..while buying them he was as nervous and excited as he was the day he proposed her and even today there was something happy inside and a little fear...a mix of emotions...a jigsaw of memories...all the way his thoughts were jumping from the past to the future...till he finally reached Ragini's apartment.

He settled himself..took a deep breath in and rang the door bell...after two minutes the house maid opened the door and let him in...as he stepped into the house..his eyes were madly looking for Neha...just then the maid got him a glass of water and told him that there is nobody at home..Rahul enquired from her"where is Neha???"...to which the maid replied"actually Neha
ma'am was not keeping well since 3-4 days..so Ragini ma'am has taken her to the hospital today..."..."what???"Rahul lost his smile immediately..."what happened to her??which hospital..."..."I don't know sir"the maid replied nervously..the bouquet of flowers fell from his hands...dialing Raginni's number,he ran towards his car...Raginni picked up his call.."hello".."Raginni...where are you??what happened to Neha???how is she????"...to which Ragini replied.."We are at the City Hospital...Neha had a severe migraine attack ...so I got here here...the doctors are checking..."..."I am coming.."...saying this he disconnected the call...In no time he reached the hospital ..making the necessary enquiries at the help desk...he rushed to see Neha..as he was hurrying through the corridors he collided with Ragini..."where were you guys?what happened...what are the doctors saying...how is she?????"...

[to be continued...]

15 comments:

  1. oh.. i wish shez fyn !
    post da next one very soon :)

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  2. i hope she's fine too.
    waiting for next part.

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  3. Yaar post the next part soon. Don't take much time

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  4. i thot so..somethng is gonna happen to her..i guess tats the best way to make him realize tat hw important she's for him...

    aww...

    plees next part jaldi likhna ...

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  5. I leave the story line to u completely...:).U can make it the best, i believe ..

    plz post the next one with all the emotions that u want to add dear ..u r the one lovelyyy gal..:)

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  6. How often, bad health or bad times makes ppl realise things and hence brighten the future...

    Good... :)

    Do post the continuation and end it as soon as possible... :) Cant wait to see them get together.. hehe :D

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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  7. Still continued!?? When are you goin to finish it?! :(

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  8. @pinkzz
    well the next part is there for u to see sweetheart!
    hope u like it!!
    thanks for coming here regularly n reading the story!
    take care!
    god bless!

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  9. @leo
    now that the next part has been posted i don't think its much of a suspense anymore...
    but thankss a llllllottttt for following the story so patiently Leo..hope u like the continuation ...

    take care!
    god bless!

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  10. @ekam
    hiee dear
    well the next part is posted now for u to read...hope u like it...thanks a ton for dropping by...for reading the story with interest...i truly appreciate it!
    thank you!
    god bless!

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  11. @pj...
    yupp...ab realization k liye kuch toh karna tha na ya...so there it goes...
    the next part is posted sweetheart!
    hope u like it!!
    thanks a ton for being so patient...and for following the story regularly!
    take care!
    hugs!

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  12. @prams
    awweee....thank you soooooooo muchhhhhh...thanks a lot for that encouraging comment dear...it really means a lot to me...thanks for placing that trust on me...i will try not to disappoint u with the sequels....hope u njoy them!
    thanks for being ever so kind n encouraging!
    you rock!
    take care!
    god bless!

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  13. @arjun
    thank u sooooooooooooo muchhhhh for following the story Arjun...its a pleasure to have u here always...
    ahmmm....end it soon...well i will try to....do that as soon as possible...but guess u will have to bear it for a few more parts coz u know i get carried away while writing...but will try to be precise...pakka...
    thanks for reading....,bearing and encouraging always!
    take care!
    god bless!

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  14. @thoorika
    hehehe...firstly thanks a tonnnn for dropping by and reading...i love seeing u here...thank u!
    ya i will try to wrap it up soon...not very good with precise writing abhi tak...get carried away always...but jaldi finish karungi...will spare my precious readers....heheh...
    thanks for coming!
    take care!
    god bless!

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