Sunday, September 13, 2009

In search of the past days-5


As he was flipping through the pages of the newspaper...he came across his weekly horoscope which said"you are going through a lot of turmoil in your personal life..a personal relationship demands immediate attention..do not be laid back ..since life does not give a second chance always.."...with this his eyes open wide he thought to himself..."what the hell is this suppose to mean..???is this astrologer spying on me??..or has this message just been published for me in specific?.."..."or is it God's way of telling me that i better do something before it gets too late..?"with this he closed his eyes...

Today began his search for the past days..memories of those beautiful moments spent with Neha were flashing in his mind one after the other..from the day he proposed..to the day the day of their wedding..then the two years they stayed together and off course the painful moment when Neha was leaving home..just then he opened his eyes and got up..as he was getting up...he saw an old lady waiting on one side of the road..and on the opposite side of the road was an old man eagerly trying really hard to overcome the hustle bustle and traffic of the road in order to reach her...once he reached he took her hand in his...and holding it tight he took her across the lane..Rahul carefully observed the old couple...who then walked down the lane hand in hand ...the wrinkles of their skin had not one bit lessened the love of their eyes and their care and concern...for each other..observing the old couple a sudden thought came to his mind.."why did I do it??why did I break my promise...I had held Neha 's hand forever and promised to walk with her through this journey of life then how did leave her alone in the middle and started moving ahead...this is not happening...I love her...I will cross this distance between us ...hold her hand ..this time forever ..and get her back into my life...yes...exactly what I will do..I want to grow old with her....I will not waste this second chance...why should I..after all I love her...yes....I love her ...." ..

He immediately went inside to get ready...all this while there was a constant smile on his face...he was imagining all that he would do once Neha gets back home with him .."Neha you were right I am a fool...I don't know what took me so long..to realize that for me life is you ..then how can I live without you...I promise there will be no complaints now..just love...like it was earlier...just get back once and i will never let go off you..."..these were the words he said out aloud before the mirror...and once he was ready...he dashed out of is house to get her back...


[to be continued]

25 comments:

  1. a very good realization! the horoscope was scarily accurate! :) gave me the creeps! :D

    nicely written Paarz.. waiting for part 6! :)

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  2. HI Parzi,

    That was the beautiful naration as always..:)...u have shown the transition of his emotions very neatly and superbly...

    am awaiting the next part :)

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  3. Aww... the old couple bit was cute :) Me too waiting for part 6!!!

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  4. IT just takes that much of 'Realisation' to make things better for life.... And i like the point you make through this episode- Never let a 'hectic' life take over you... All 'love' needs is 'love', not 'time'. :D

    Hope this one ends with a nice gesture frm the guy... It wld be gr8 :) .. apart frm him saying sorries.. :) Just my opinion.. :)

    U r awesome in imagining stories parzii.. :)
    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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  5. Hey!v nicely written.I am eagerly waiting for the second part....Do write soon ,I m following u now
    take care

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  6. hmmmm story is going good...waiting for next part dear :)

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  7. wow... i hope everything goes rite.!

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  8. Wow! Beautiful.. That was one unexpected story.. You write so well. And the old couple was so apt for the story.. Waiting for the next part of the story.. And please don't keep us waiting for long time.. Continue it soon :)

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  9. @Leo
    hey leo...thank u soooooooooooo much.....as always..the first one to encourage me...to read the story and to make a promise of reading the next one!
    thank u soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhh.....i really appreciate it a lot...thanks a ton!
    take care!
    god bless!

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  10. @pramoda
    thank u sooooooooooooooooo much dear!
    ur words are really inspiring...i m very glad that u liked what i wrote so far...hope u like the continuation as well!
    thanks a lot for coming here regularly ...taking out the time to read and for leaving such wonderful comments!
    thank uuuuuuuuuu!
    take care!
    god bless!

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  11. @roshu
    thanks a lotttttttttttt dear!i m glad u liked that bit....thanks for following the story and liking it...i hope u like the other parts as well!
    thanks a ton sweetheart!!
    take care!
    god bless!

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  12. @Rohini
    thank u soooo muchhhhh dear!
    glad u liked it!
    thanks for reading and dropping a comment!
    take care!
    god bless!

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  13. oh gosh...i hope neha is fyn n tey both get together agn...kahaani mei twist n tragedy is wat depresses me the most...hmm

    ab agle part ka intezaar zoron shoron se :P

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  14. ouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuchhhhh something about your emotions is so real... and i loved the narration :)

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  15. @Arjun
    once again..thank u sooooooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhh Arjun....for all the appreciation...u always leave me smiling...thanks a ton!i'm so glad that u liked it!thank you...n yes...u r ryt...a sory would just be very obvious...lets see...how it goes further...
    thanks for ur opinion...it really matters a lot to me!thank u sooooo much...i shall keep it in mind!
    take care!
    keep smiling!
    god bless!

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  16. @happy birdie
    hiee...welcome here.....
    thank u soooooooooooooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhh for those lovely words of appreciation....for liking the story and for following the blog...its a pleasure to have u here!
    thanks a ton for dropping by....hope to c u often!
    take care!
    god bless!

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  17. @ordinary girl
    aww..thank u sooooooo muchhhh dear...its a pleasure to c u here regularly..thank u sooo much for taking out ur precious time for my story...for reading...for following it...for appreciating it...n for the kind words u leave behind!
    thanks a lot!
    take care!
    god bless!

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  18. @vedu
    well...that we will have to see dear...hope u enjoy d rest of the story as well...thanks for reading so far...n liking it!
    really means a lot!
    thank u!
    god bless you!

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  19. @ekam
    awwww...thank you sooooooo muchhhhhhhh dear!
    I'm really happy that u liked what i wrote...thanks a lot for those kind n encouraging words...n for following the blog...i really appreciate it!
    i will try to complete it soon...for sure!
    thanks a ton !
    take care!
    god bless!

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  20. @priya
    aweeeee...choooo chweeett...ur enthusiasm... is so motivating...thanks alot sweetheart!
    well....the twists n turns are necessary na..though i m not very gud at them...but still learning..
    what keeps me going is that there r sum people like u who care to bear my work and are always encouraging and supportive!thanks dear!
    take care!
    hugss!
    god bless!

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  21. @americanising desi
    hieee...welcome....
    thank u soooooooooooooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhh for dropping by...for all the appreciation n for your precious time!
    thanks a lot!
    take care!
    god bless!

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  22. @americanising desi
    hieee...welcome....
    thank u soooooooooooooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhh for dropping by...for all the appreciation n for your precious time!
    thanks a lot!
    take care!
    god bless!

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  23. Marvellous writing (imagination)!!!

    Hope things go well :)

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  24. Oh my!! Knowat m @ ofc and reading ya series all at once. Very well written. You are doing great!! Kp up the fabolous work. Thumbs up!:)

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