Sunday, October 4, 2009

In Search of the past days-7

"Listen Rahul calm down...she is fine now.."...Ragini replied.."I want to see her,right now..where is she???".."Rahul right now she is with the doctor,you can meet her in a while..right now i need to talk to you...come with me..".."Ragini i need to see her right away...I cant wait..we'll talk later.."..."please Rahul what i need to tell you is very important...try and understand..."..though he least wanted to still he went down to the hospital cafeteria with Ragini..where ordering two cups of coffee both of them sat across the table!

Taking a sip of coffee Ragini said,"Rahul..why are you letting all of this happen..?you love Neha don't you??then why all of this...??I have lost my sister she is not the joyful and vibrant Neha I have known all these years..she has become this loner ..with no spark to live..."..Rahul interrupted in between "Ragini I know what you mean,but that's exactly what I am here for..I had gone to your place to get Neha back..I love her and I can't live without her...I know I have made mistakes but I will rectify everything...trust me..everything is going to be fine.."... Rahul's words definitely brought some peace to Ragini..but her face still exhibited tension and worry.."Thank God at least you realised that you guys are incomplete without each other and I'm really glad that you want to take her back in your life...but...." "But what??"...Rahul's anxiety levels rose even more..."but what Ragini...????"...Ragini softened her tone a little and said.."Rahul...this is not all that easy..because it is just not a matter of an apology anymore or settlement..but a lot more..."..."stop confusing me ya..get down to the point straight...what do you mean..."... "Fine then...listen..."Ragini began again..."I got Neha here today because she was complaining of migraine for the past 2-3 days...today morning her condition worsened so i had to drag her to the hospital... the doctors here tell me that Neha is suffering from severe depression...not only that for the past few months she has been using sedatives to induce sleep as she complains of regular insomnia..she has also been seeking counselling and the counsellor reports that she has lost confidence in herself and her marriage..she feels neglected..and considers her life a waste..there is just no urge to live..she is only surviving ..."as Ragini said all of this her voice became heavy..tears flowed out of her eyes..and Rahul on the other hand was stunned,his eyes were moist as well..he could not lift his eyes to look at Ragini...he was overpowered by emotions of regret,pain, guilt.. He banged his fist on the table"damn it ..its all my fault..I am the reason of her pain and suffering...how could I...?how could I?"...with this he broke down...Ragini kept her hand on his shoulder but there was nothing that she could possibly say at the time...she tried but words failed her..in a while he rose his head up,spread his hands over his eyes took a sip of coffee and said..

"Ragini...I know what I have to do..I am the reason behind Neha's condition and today I promise you I will bring my life back to life...I will return to you your sister who was a chirpy soul always...she will bounce back ..once again she will be confident,once again she will giggle ,the only thing that will change is my love because I will love her more than ever and that too forever..."
A smile appeared on Ragini's face...."Rahul now I am sure we can get Neha back..thank you so much..I don't think i need to say it but still...just remember you have my support in whatever you do.." "Thanks Ragini..I will be needing a lot of it...anyways now can we please go see her...i cant wait...rest we will see later"..."yes but....i don't know how she will react seeing you here"Ragini replied in worry.. "don't worry...lets go".. [to be continued]

21 comments:

  1. Hey Parzi,

    lovelyy narrations and this is the most required story to be known to all the youngsters, who have been staying busy in work related things, keeping their better halves apart..

    thanks for taking initiation and writing this..continue it for longer time and keep the emotions and expressions the way u wanted to ..

    Thanks dear..

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  2. even i wonder how she will react! :)
    i think she will be upset for the start and then calm down!! :D

    but ur the authoress! waiting for more Parzi!! :)

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  3. I really love this series Parzi! And the twists in all the parts are really interesting to read about :)
    Keep writing this series! :D

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  4. aww shucks.. Prams, u took my spot.. first at XT is Leo's comment! :)

    waaaa! :(

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  5. good one....waiting for next :)

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  6. wow.. please jaldi end it naa.. i can't wait for more..

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  7. Hey Vinay,

    hehehehe...better luck next time..:)

    hey parzi, plz inform me when u post it next time...checretllyyyy heheheh..

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  8. Good one Parzi .Would be waiting for the next part :)

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  9. whaaat?!! no no no! not fair... the two P's can't secretly take away my first comment kingdom!!! :P

    no no no no no!! :D

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  10. kahaani abhi aur bhi baaki hei....wooof....at last the time came when tey wer gonna see each othr after days n...ter comes
    "to b contd" :P:P
    gr88..abhi waiting eagerly..to see hw she reacts ...:):)

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  11. good again.. :)

    no more talking.. Just waiting.. :P

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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  12. @prams
    thank u sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh prams...i dont know what to say to u...for being so supportive,patient and inspiring always...
    u light up my face with a smile whenever you drop a comment..thanks a ton for it!
    i cant tell u how much it means to me really!
    you are a sweetheart!thankuzzzzzzz!
    take care!
    hugs!

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  13. @Leo
    well i have to still think on that one Leo...see thats why i say you can not just write but think well as well...when are u sending me ur brains?????:P
    but thank u soooooooooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh for coming here and bearing my nonsense so patiently...thanks a ton Leo...:)
    take care!
    god bless!

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  14. @Roshu
    awww...thank u sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh little one...i am really glad that u r liking what i am writing...its a honor to be read by you...thanks a ton for following the story n liking it!
    thank u sooooooo muchhhhhhh!
    take care!
    god bless!

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  15. @Leo n @prams
    i guess i should just touch wood...or say i m plain lucky or blessed...the two writers whom i really look up to...are arguing about posting the first comment on my little blog...wowwww...
    what should i say both u guys are wonderful..thank u sooooooo much for coming here regularly to read n support me..i cnt tell u how much it means to me..you guys always make me smile...thanks a ton!!!!
    and Leo don't worry the p's wont do anything...we r gud kids..ryt prams???hehehe
    jokes apart thank u sooooooo much both of you...1st or 2nd...whenever it is ...ur presence here makes all the difference!
    thanks a tonnnn!u guys rock!
    thankuzzzzz!

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  16. @riya
    heyyy riya..
    a very warm welcome here....pleasure to have u here!thank u sooooooooooooo much for reading this story...and for the lovely feedback!
    thanks a ton!
    take care!
    god bless!

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  17. @vedu...
    hieee....thanks for following the story so patiently dear....
    i will try to wrap it soon..but u might have to bear a little more...:P
    but thank u soooooooooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhhh for coming n reading!
    thanks a ton!take care!
    god bless!

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  18. @ekam
    thanks a lottttttttttttttttttt girl..thank u soooooooooo much for reading and dropping a comment...i really appreciate it!
    thank you!!hope u enjoy the sequels as well!
    till then..take care!
    god bless!

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  19. @pj
    hanjiii...abhi kafi baki hai...since my mind is slow so the story will be slow as well...so u will have to wait and bear a lot more..:P
    hehehe......thank u sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much for following the story with interest dear...hope I satisfy you with the upcoming parts...but thanks a ton for coming here to read n support me regularly!
    thank uuuuuuuuu:)
    take care!
    hugsssss!

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  20. @arjun
    thank u sooooooooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhh arjun...
    thanks a lot for reading and appreciating my effort as always!
    thank u soooooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!
    hope u like the other parts as well!
    thanks a ton!
    take care!
    god bless!

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  21. Good decision... Good that he had no ego!

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