Tuesday, September 1, 2009

In Search of the past days-2


"Neha..I know what you mean to say but I cant begin to tell you how happy I am to hear all of this from you and that's because what you perceived from my actions is exactly what i wanted to convey...you are very special to me and I don't want to miss any opportunity to tell you that I love you!and as far as calls are concerned its my way of staying close to you ..even when we are apart...to know that you are fine..keeps me tension free..and Ma'am i promise you one thing...I will always trouble and bother you the same way... whether you like it or not...so get use to it..because time might change but my love and concern wont"

..Today Neha and rahul have been married for two years..its yet another evening...same cafe..but today Neha is sitting here alone...recalling the day when Rahul had promised her that nothing is going to change his love for her.. Neha's eyes which had dreams,affection and tears of happiness were sheltering pain,loneliness and a search of the past days..a numerous questions were running across her mind...


"where did all the care and concern go?".."is he the same man who said i was special to him?".."someone who had the world's time to talk to me irrespective of a hectic schedule???"..."have I changed?".."has he changed?".."am I expecting too much????"..."God...."she covered her face with her hands...was motionless for a while then she raised her head..wiped her tears and said to herself"I want my answers...I am not carrying on like this...I married for love...Not to be taken for granted..or to be a show piece in his house..I did not marry him for 3 months I married him to grow old with him...I know ..I know I can't expect him to be like a teenage boy friend now but at least like a friend...a companion..being in a marriage if I have to be lonely only then I might as well be alone...this is it..."...she got up and rushed back home!
It was 8 at night..the door bell rang..Neha opened the door..Rahul entered in.

[to be continued...]

24 comments:

  1. hmm... waiting for the continuation!

    2nd part, was expecting more romance than this.. hmm..! :)

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  2. i love the way you narrate stories..:)

    waiting fr next one....!

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  3. wow...first time here...narration is excellent...hope to c yur next post as well! takcare..keep em comin

    H a R y

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  4. that's really sad..
    love and marriage are totally different..uffff..
    wer dus all that disappear..hmmm waiting for the third part :)

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  5. hmm waiting for the next part..:)

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  6. Nice narration and waiting to read what happens next :)

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  7. wat a turn!!!

    The three months love.. Happens in all marriages :P

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  8. That was a unexpected twist! :)

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  9. Hey,

    Nice narration..:)
    Hope to see them live 'happily ever after.." in the upcoming one..after all, every thing is a part of life..

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  10. YOU HAVE BEEN TAGGED AT MY BLOG!!! :) http://roshwritesx.blogspot.com

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  11. u leave it at interesting points.. !! :)

    Very well narrated Parul..!! Waiting for Mr. Rahul to talk.. ;)

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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  12. @Leo
    so sorry for disappointing you Leo....I had planned this sudden twist after all that mushy stuff...don't know if it works or if I can pull it off well lets see..
    hope u like the other parts...but thank u soooooooo much for always taking out your time and reading my works and being the 1st one to comment often...thanks a ton!
    take care!
    god bless!

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  13. @vyshu
    thank u soooooooooooooooo muchhh dear...thanks a ton...i m glad that u liked it...hope u like the next one as well...do let me know alright..
    take care!
    god bless u!

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  14. @hary
    welcome...thanks a lot for visiting..taking out your time to read and for that sweet and encouraging comment....thank u so much....
    take care!
    god bless!

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  15. @priya
    hmm...thats y i dint name the characters the way u had asked me to....coz this is a sad sequel..
    but it doesn't happen the same way always and with everyone...so dont worry...
    anyway thank u so much ya..
    hpe u like the next part!
    take care!god bless u!

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  16. @nuchu...
    hahaha...does it????I hope not..
    anyway thank u sooooo much for taking out time to read my work in midst of a hectic schedule dear..
    its wonderful to c u here always!
    thanks a ton!luv ya!
    take care!

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  17. @vedu
    thanks a lot dear....
    take care!
    god bless u!!

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  18. @roshu
    yes...a little bit of a bend:P...
    and thank u sooooooooooooooooo much for tagging me rosh...i will take it up soon for sure..
    thanks a ton!
    take care!
    god bless u!

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  19. @pramoda
    hieee.thank u so much for taking out ur time and reading my post...really glad u liked it..well if it a "happily ever after" ending or not..for that u will have to wait a little..cant promise anything...coz honestly haven't thought of it..lets see..
    but pleasure to have u here
    thanku!
    take care!
    god bless!

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  20. @Arjun
    ahmmm honestly...what u r calling interesting points is the point where my mind stops working and words fail to make sense...so i put it on hold..hehehe...n conveniently write -to be conitnued...
    but thanks a lot for liking it finding it interesting...u can see what Mr.Rahul said and then tell me how was the next one..
    till then..
    take care!
    keep smiling!
    god bless!

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  21. @kasabian girl
    thank u soooooooooo much dear...hope u like the next one as well...thanks a ton for reading and for the kind feedback!
    take care!
    god bless!

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  22. @angel
    great to see u here again...glad u r liking it so far...hope the next part does not disappoint u..
    but anyway thank u sooooooooo much...for reading and for the comment..thanks a ton!
    take care!
    godblesss~!

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  23. hey parzi, no apologies...
    going away from the expected train of thoughts, shows an excellent quality in the story teller!

    :)

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